Limning the Ordinary

Limning the Ordinary

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Limning the Ordinary
Walden

Walden

a poem

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Bonita Jewel
Jun 26, 2024
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Limning the Ordinary
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Walden
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This is my walden

  breathing

into the spaces

 letting

the void between 

be part of my story

 rather than

chasing and filling

each empty space with

some movement some noise

  seeing

the breath and space

expand

contract

form

into some silent thing that is in itself

no longer silent

touching

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